Campaign Review · September 2026
The 30-Day
Guarantee
Everything built for the September offer, in one place: the Meta ad set, the reels, the landing page and the email and SMS follow-up. Your three new hooks are built and waiting for you to pick one. Every claim on every asset comes from your September campaign documents, nothing added.
Your New Hooks
Pick one and we build it outYour new headlines, word for word, on clean club photography. Built at the two sizes that carry the Meta feed so you can compare them properly. Tell us which one leads and we take it across the remaining placements and the carousel.
We set the third one, “Your next 30 days could change more than you think”, aside for the statics. At ad sizes it has to shrink to fit, and a headline that small stops working in feed. It would still read well as an email subject line or on the landing page, if you want it kept somewhere.
Meta · Single Image
The original hook, all four placements
Meta · Single Image, Version B
Same offer and headline, group-class photo and a fuller deadline line, to test against the set above
Meta · Carousel
Hook, the three plan milestones, then the guarantee
→ Scroll the strip to see the cards in order
Reels
Two treatments, two voices. Tell us which voice you want to runVersion A · Female Voice
- Still creative with a slow push · 19.7s
Version A · Male Voice
- Still creative with a slow push · 25.8s
Version B · Female Voice
- Six scenes, type moving with the voice · 19.7s
Version B · Male Voice
- The same scenes on the male read · 25.8s
Landing Pages
Where each ad lands. Real club photography and your verified Google reviewsBuilt the way you asked: page 3’s flow with page 1’s header, now a single page. The day-count numbers beside Starting Point and Biostrength are gone, and the wording is the version you sent.
Email & SMS Follow-Up
Three steps over seven days, CASL-compliant, ready to load into Gleantap| Step | Send | Subject | What it does | Exit |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Email 1 | Day 0 | You’re closer than you think | Warm welcome, introduces the guarantee | Tour booked |
| Email 2 | Day 3 | This time can be different—here’s the plan | Shows the guided plan | Tour booked |
| Email 3 | Day 7 | How long have you been thinking about starting? | Full guarantee terms and the Sept 30 deadline | Tour booked / complete |
The wording as it will send. Read it and change anything you want changed. This is your rewrite, word for word. The built templates get handed over once you approve.
Email 1 · Day 0
You’re closer than you think
The perfect time rarely shows up. Here’s what to do instead.
Hi {{First Name}},
The hardest part usually isn’t the workout. It’s walking through the door and getting started.
Maybe you’ve been waiting for more time, more energy or more motivation. But the perfect time rarely shows up. You don’t have to feel ready to begin. Sometimes, beginning is what makes you feel ready.
That’s why we created our 30-Day Guarantee.
Join One Health Clubs on a qualifying annual membership by September 30 and you’ll receive a guided 30-day plan built around you—with our team beside you from the start.
Complete the plan and, if One Health Clubs isn’t right for you, we’ll refund all payments related to your membership.
Your first step is simple: come see the club, meet our team and ask us anything.
[ Book Your Private Club Tour ]
See you soon,
The One Health Clubs Team
P.S. Thirty days can change more than your routine. It can change what you believe is possible for yourself.
Email 2 · Day 3
This time can be different—here’s the plan
The difference isn’t trying harder. It’s having the right support.
Hi {{First Name}},
If you’ve ever joined a gym with the best intentions, only to have life take over a few weeks later, you’re not alone.
It wasn’t a lack of willpower. Lasting change comes from having the right support, enough variety and a place you genuinely want to return to.
Join One Health Clubs on a qualifying annual membership by September 30, and your first 30 days will include:
✓ A personalized Starting Point Session within 10 days
✓ A guided Biostrength Setup within 14 days
✓ Strength training, cardio and classes to keep you moving
✓ One achievable goal: eight workouts in 30 days—classes count
Complete the plan and decide for yourself. If One Health Clubs isn’t right for you, we’ll refund all payments related to your membership.
[ Book Your Private Club Tour ]
Cheering you on,
The One Health Clubs Team
P.S. All we ask is that you give the club—and yourself—a fair chance.
Email 3 · Day 7
How long have you been thinking about starting?
Thirty days from now, you could be glad you didn’t wait.
Hi {{First Name}},
Weeks? Months? Maybe longer?
There will always be a reason to wait. But picture yourself 30 days from now: feeling stronger, having more energy and building a routine that finally feels like yours—or simply feeling proud that you started.
With our 30-Day Guarantee, you don’t have to wonder whether One Health Clubs is right for you.
Join on a qualifying annual membership by September 30, then complete:
✓ Your Starting Point Session within 10 days
✓ Your Biostrength Setup within 14 days
✓ Eight workouts within 30 days—classes count
Complete the plan and, if One Health Clubs isn’t right for you, we’ll refund all payments related to your membership.
Come tour the club, meet our team and see what your first 30 days could look like.
[ Book Your Private Club Tour ]
In your corner,
The One Health Clubs Team
P.S. Don’t wait for the perfect time. Start at One.
Every email carries your club address, phone number, a one-click unsubscribe and a privacy link in the footer, as CASL requires.
SMS · paired with each email
- Day 0: Ready to start? Give yourself 30 days at One Health Clubs. Complete your guided plan and decide for yourself. If One Health Clubs isn’t right for you, we’ll refund all payments related to your membership. Book your private tour: {{tour_booking_link}}
- Day 3: Still waiting for the perfect time? This time can be different—with the right plan and support. Join One Health Clubs by Sept. 30 with our 30-Day Guarantee. Your first step is simple: book your private club tour. {{tour_booking_link}}
- Day 7: Your document has Day 0 and Day 3 only. Send us the Day 7 wording and we’ll drop it straight in, we won’t write a message that sends under your number.
What We Need From You
- Send us the Day 7 SMS. Your document has Day 0 and Day 3 only.
- Tell us the tour booking link to drop into {{tour_booking_link}}.
- Confirm who signs off on the Gleantap load, and we will hand it over ready to paste.
Where It Stands
| Item | State | Waiting on |
|---|---|---|
| Landing page | Merged as requested, numbers removed | Your sign-off, then the tour form goes live |
| New hooks (2) | Built at 1:1 and 4:5 | Pick the one that leads |
| Meta singles (4 placements × 2 versions) | Finished | Your sign-off |
| Meta carousel (5 cards) | Finished | Your sign-off |
| Reels (2 treatments × 2 voices) | Finished | Pick the voice you want to run |
| Email & SMS (3 steps) | Updated to your new copy | Day 7 SMS wording, booking link, then Gleantap load |
| Hero video | Slot reserved | Your footage, due end of August |